When I edited the story dubbed Tajik Jimmy, I removed a number of sections in order to make the story more compact but still effective.
1. I shortened the musical interludes that played during pauses in the reporter's speech.
2. If there were two sections that mentioned the same information, I deleted one of them.
3. I deleted the music before the introduction so that the story began with the lead.
4. I also deleted short phrases that could be inferred. For example, I deleted "took Russians by storm" since it was already mentioned that the video was a hit in Russia.
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